All Comments on 'Secret Life of a Guilty Wife Ch. 03'

by theoncomingstorm

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LickideesplitLickideesplitover 10 years ago
Wrong category (still)

Sweetie is NOT an LW. She has NO apparent contact with her estranged Hubby, does not reflect ANY real 'guilt' (or any other feelings about a bad, mistaken match-up!)

This is, at best, a series of unrelated incidents which belong in Erotic Couplings!'. Even then, there is NO drama in any of these hook-ups! This is mainly "gee, look ... tab D fits into slot P!". (change slot designator at will! A, M, T, H)

LeFrog08LeFrog08over 10 years ago
RePhil summed it up nicely

and I share his views.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Another story without a husband being mentioned. You don't even have to be married in this category anymore. Just be a sicko wacc and you can post all you want!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
chapters too short

It might help the writing if you combined these short "chapters" into one longer submission. It's all too episodic and disconnected right now.

hindsight2020hindsight2020over 10 years ago
Now I am reading to find...

... out if it can get worse. So far I am not disappointed. It keeps getting dumber.

RePhilRePhilover 10 years ago
Just another WACC story

Wrong section Mr Writer. You crafted the perfect picture of a women who is solely a life suppport system for her cunt with no other redeeming qualities whatsoever

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awful

Just plain bad

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Why is this in Loving Wives?

The husband is never mentioned. EC would be better.

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