by ShadowWriterCa
Well told, believable, great character development.
It may be "flowery" but thats just your style. If everyones style was the same why have more than one author? Get the next chapter out soon!
I agree that the story is OUTSTANDING. It is suspensful and well written. I have been reading each day and have remained engrossed and immersed in the story. I should have been praising each chapter, but didn't take the time. It's not fair to the author, but sometimes we don't take the time to show our appreciation for a fine story.
for the next chapters! please! i'm so close!
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