All Comments on 'Secret No Longer Ch. 09'

Just a second..." I heard his voice approaching from wherever he had been. "Hello, who am I...?" she said, then stopped dead in his tracks.

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Just a second..." I heard his voice approaching from wherever he had been. "Hello, who am I...?" he said, then stopped dead in his tracks.

The writing is good but the mother and son have zero respect for the husband. They only care about their own base needs while he works to support the family. She should just divorce him so he could can find somebody who respects him. I'm sure the son will have no problem accepting money from dad to go to college. The main characters are so unlikable because they only care about themselves

The previous poster should go back and read chapter 7. The lady goes through hell struggling with her feelings about the right and wrong of it. Afterward she tells her friend straight out how she wishes she could find a way to fuck her son and nont hurt her husband. They agree that's not possible and she asks her friend for support fighting temptation even when the friend gives her some tough talk about it.

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Later on she loses the battle and gives in to her desire. She tries to keep from thinking about her husband. In this chapter she says how she wants to try some wild ideas while there is time before she and her son have to give up what they're doing, which is when hubby gets back from wherever he is. She wants to make believe she can have her fun now and go back to normal later with no pain or regret. My guess is that the story will go on about how reality sets in someday and how she and everyone else will have to deal with it then. But for sure, if she and her son were as heartless as you say, none of these emotional stresses would be happening.

Thank you Shadow. I am so enjoying this story. it has taken you a while to get here (and this is not a complaint). I can't wait to see the twists and turns down decadence road you take us.

Though I don't agree with a previous posters overall critical assessment, I am curious how you intend to have mom and son deal with dad in the this torrid tale.

thank you for your effort and thank you for sharing your talent.

She shure fucked his son but will not have sex with Sammy without the consent of her husband?? LOL! what?

Sorry, author, this story raises so many questions for me and wanted to wait for the story to finish to ask them, but I can't get into the participants of this play.

Oh boy, is the husband really the last one to find out??

hahahaha!

<i>fucked his son but will not have sex with Sammy without the consent of her husband?? </i><br/><br/>

Yep, she did. That's intentional.

If you were ever abused by your mother than you would never wtite a story like this. I was not sexually abused but physically and emotionally abused and find you story demeaning. You have a kid that was afraid his mother and father were seperating, talks to his father about the situation and than she believes the husband put the son up to taking pictures which is not true after that I only partially read chapter 9 and now the son is a deviant, you must be proud of your writing. Step up and end this.

I know a history of abuse of any kind is painful.You have my sympathy for the pain you must have known.

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That said, though, you seem to be reading a great deal into this that isn't there. Nowhere in this story did the son--nor anyone else, for that matter--worry that the parents were separating. I don't know how you could have gotten that impression. It was a shock to him to discover that his mother was bisexual and that bothered him for a while; that's what he spoke to his father about.

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Neither is there anywhere here where Linda thinks Fred put Jason up to the photographic voyeurism. She was very upset that he condoned it, but that's all.

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Remember also that most drama, whether written, on stage, in film or television or anything else, deals with human conflicts, including moral conflicts both between and within characters. Linda, as the central character, is most intensely torn between conflicting values, morals and desires, and her behavior at this point in the story reflects that. To avoid disclosing the rest of the story prematurely I'll stop there, other than to say that (1) a story with good moral resolution is not the same as moralizing; I have no intention of making any kind of sermon out of this; and (2) I like happy endings. :-)

The impression I got from the story is that Linda thinks her husband found out about her affair and let his son film them, and she doesn't know that it was that Jason found out and LATER asked his father about it. That is why I'm waiting how this story will unfold.

On a site with group sex, incest, and all other kinds of depravity and someone came and look for morality? This is fucking hilarious. All those calling other deprave, these are fantasies, not reality. If you cannot differentiate I suggest you look for a shrink and not any stories on this site. Better use your nearest public library for reading materials.