All Comments on 'Secret Sins Ch. 01'

When I saw my favorite author on this site had posted the first installment in a new story, I was totally stoked. I love how your characters struggle and fight their slow yet inevitable slide into deviant sexual hotness. A good introductory chapter with a well fleshed out main character, I’ll be eagerly awaiting future chapters.

I was hoping you wouldn't wait too long to bring us another tale of debauchery! Your last story was one of my favorites of 2016.

Where are any mind control aspects in this story?

Solid character development continues. This author pays attention to every detail whether it be character development or description of geological site. Each step in story development is logically established and will eventually be seamlessly connected to the major plot of the story. Likewise, subplots will merbge without flaw.