All Comments on 'Secret Sins Ch. 10'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Coming into her own

Aww, she's growing up. I wonder does she have powers of her own, and Donna is teaching her. Speaking of Donna, I also wonder about major douchebag's meeting. I do have one item for you. I've seen in this and your other stories how you did meticulous research into people, places, etc. And I love it. But I regret to inform you, you missed one. And it is a common mistake, I have seen many make. But unless Sumitra grew out a bush when she converted from Islam, she would not have one. The oft seen unibrow may seem to show otherwise, but Muslim women are clean shaven, from the neck down. It's Islamic law. At least every thirty days, that pussy must be shaved. Preferrably more frequently. So Margie or Haley may have had a bush, but not Sumitra. Thought you'd want to know, since you seem so thorough. Anyways, can't for more. One of my favorite authors.

Foxterot7aFoxterot7a8 months ago

It would be interesting to determine exactly when Sera entered Tara. Likewise, it is interesting to see the growth of Sera in Tara. Based on the other three stories in this series, it appears that Sera can solve/resolve most personal problems. Sera is unstopable. 5 star series.

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