All Comments on 'Secret Sins Ch. 11'

I knew they were related. I just knew it! They are related, right? There's some kind of connection. That's for sure. The plot thickens. Still waiting on Major douchebag's consequences. I know Donna won't allow that to slide.

11 chapters so well written that I am anxious for the next yet do not want this to end.

This story has me hooked. Might just be the most well written on this web site!

I can't stop ruminating on where this story might be going when I read it - am so glad that the larger arc of some of the BEST stories (imho) on lit are being continued. Needless to say I'm hooked completely. I can't wait to see the mystery unveiling further.

Plot and subplots seamlessly merge. The author has taken his/her time entwining the various plots over 4 stories. I would thoroughly enjoy seeing the various story diagrams.