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wish2basubwish2basubabout 8 years ago
Thanks for the warning

But from the end of this chapter and then the explanation, should we just address you in the future as , Sir?

partwolfpartwolfabout 8 years ago
I think he has gotten her

the fucking machine! She's about to be drilled into oblivion. I wonder if she'll top 50 tonight??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Yes sir

Well done as always...character development is great, leaving us hanging is good. Just wish I got to read twenty or more pages instead of three.

Deejay121Deejay121about 8 years ago
Apologies for earlier comments on waiting

Couldn't agree more we'll just call You Sir, loving the twists along the way. Also love the raw emotion that comes with some chapters, then we are given a recovery chapter before the next highly charged emotional chapter. Keep up the good work, although i believe You said earlier the entire story is complete.

oneoflifesjewelsoneoflifesjewelsabout 8 years ago
Great chapter, as always!

I love your story and all of the directions you take us. I hope that you don't bring Elizabeth back as a playmate for these two.

JudyLeeJudyLeeabout 8 years ago
Several things happening.

First, Nora has some problems. I think the invisible friend may be her mother. She seems to be angry that her mother left her.

Second, Elizabeth is getting deeper into drugs and it is upsetting Gavin.

Third, the basement has been made ready for some serious sessions. Alex may see more of the wolf than she expects.

Thanks for continuing the story. My mom died on January 31st and I really need some escape material. We knew it was coming and she was peaceful with her family around her. Judy

Crazy_ChristineCrazy_Christineabout 8 years ago
2016 is going to be a great year!

thank you for your continuing the journey

Shadow21GXShadow21GXalmost 8 years ago
Cliffhanger

Nice cluffhanger. I was gonna be mad if you just skipped to the next day. :)

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