All Comments on 'Secret Summer Tryst'

by Brandybeebee

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Stone_RhineStone_Rhinealmost 11 years ago
Forbidden lust perhaps.

A very hot erotic story indeed. I like how you have kept the secrecy with the reader by not revealing their names or where they are, and writing it with an essence of mystery. I wonder if the story was inspired by what might have been or the possibility of such.

I enjoyed it very much and do hope you write more stories.

chytownchytownalmost 11 years ago
Real Hot Shortie****

Well written thanks for sharing.

Jayc57Jayc57almost 11 years ago

Nice story Brandy, very hot thanks for sharing

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
The tryst a treat...

Very nice Brandy. Short, to the point though never lessening the speed, flow and sensuality of the story..

T. Fit

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Thank you!!

I CAME IN MY PANTS!!!

JWrenJWrenover 9 years ago
Stolen moments

The blindfold, the anticipation, the stealthy approach, the taking and giving: all bundled up for a sensuous mating. Here's to next year, BrandyBB . . .

CleevedreamsCleevedreamsover 3 years ago

Loved your story.

More writing is required!

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