All Comments on 'Secrets in the Night Pt. 01'

I love the start of this story.

I use to dress up in my moms sexy underwear and sniff her dirty panties while listening to her fuck my dad.

I'm sure she knew what I did as she would leave sperm soaked panties on top of the hamper for me.

I can't wait for chapter two.

a well written start, looking forward to where this leads, hoping dad gets involved

Stupid!!!! JUNK erotica.

Not too awful bad, but very short. I would like to see where this story goes.

Yet one, "shaved" shit..

A little rushed but some good realistic situations. Keep writing, should be a little more realistic and write about jo with stockings and shoes. You have a lot to offer.

You left it where the story appears to have much more. Please continue so we can see where this is going and how you will write it!