All Comments on 'Security Theater'

that master is a complete jerk.

I have to agree with bloodandsand. The Master is a total jerk.

But the feeling it invoked is that ugly behavior is neither sexy or dominant, just ugly. She would be better off with the new couch, new locks and a new master.

... and welcome to Literotica with thanks for your first story. I have to agree with the other commentators about the character of the Dominant, however - there is nothing about him to deserve her attention. He is a jerk. I know you can write; bring us something better next time!

This is not a Dom, this is a prime example of an abuser expoliting a dependent, weak woman.

Thanks for the comments! I'm not very experienced in d/s relationships, and so I definitely mishandled the dynamic between the two characters.

I mostly wanted to write this for the final scene and the themes of performance and security.