All Comments on 'Seduce me, Jack... Ch. 14'

i mean you make two people fall in love and then all of a suden you pull them apart purposely y wat do get out of it just to piar up the girl with another guy...like diana.

For one you might wnatto pair the actual hero jack and amanda together and do a happy neding with them 2 and not other people involbed they deserve each other,that might get you some votes and less complaints that your complaining about try a bloody happy ending!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The final chapter is coming... I told you Jack and Amanda would have their happy ending. There are always conflicts, even in real life... believe me... I've lived it!!! I'm still praying for a happy ending... If I don't continue to screw it up...

Some totally awesome work.