by CateJ
Nothing better than a feel good love story with a happy ending, Very well written. Please, more stories.. We love it..
I loved the way you took your time to develop the characters and how the story wasn't about sex, at least not all about sex. :)
Great story! I wasn't too sure about Angel's intentions, but I fell in love with her upon her return. Would love to see a continuation. Sex was beautifully described, however the wife's turn at bat should've equally been shown.
Like the other comments I thought your timing and detail and build up was excellent. Please write more!
your story is beautifully written i would like to read more. loved it . please carry on - A
Very nicely crafted, well-written story. Extremely erotic, and rewarded investment in reading time, not just a quick dip. Well done.
Very nice story, well written and beautifully erotic, with a happy ending to boot. No real shocks or surprises- I guessed that Angel would return- but it was a lovely ride getting there.
Thanks, and its five stars from me.
You've put a nice twist on the cheating spouse story. A good burn on the bastard, but that's almost beside the point--the sweet love story dominates.
I loved it, so much real love in there. Beat the cheating husband without having to read the boring details. Should be a follow up
Lesbian stories aren’t my fantasy even though I’ve kissed girls before but this story is brilliant I love the way she gets her own back on her cheating husband
This story just absolutely does not age! I loved reading it the first time and again since, what an amazing story for thesr two lovers. I just wish there were we more!
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