All Comments on 'Seducing Anya Ch. 03'

Good story you should have drug it out a little more, would have liked to see cal react worse not voilent tho but he could have stormed out and i would have liked to see if Valerie chased him or not ,valerie seems to have more feelings for anya not fair for cal but still it was good.

Yeah a theme of later chapters will be the difficulties created by the love triangle - although they all love each other, above all Valerie loves Anya, Anya loves Cal and Cal loves Valerie.

A different but caring story. I think Anni and Cal must work on getting her to a point of less pain and more enjoyment. Val will be important to love Anni and Cal and get her share of action from both of them alone and together as three people. Yes, we need more please. Thanks.

Later chapters will deal with the three of them developing their feelings for one another, and with Cal making sex easier and gentler for Anya

I'm so sympathetic to these characters. So many parallels. I went through something similar with my sister and girlfriend while we were in college and we just couldn't work it out. We barely speak to one another 10 years later. I wish it were different. We loved each other so much. I feel that I could write your next 10 chapters.

Please make this a happy ending story?

The long term intention is definitely for a happy ending. I’ll see how many chapters I can get done as I have a lot of work and study commitments; certainly at least two more. And possibly some side-stories involving the characters.

I've read various versions of this kind story before, and I've always wondered if I'll read one where the boyfriend/brother just nopes out with his sister in disgust and they both leave the girlfriend lmao. Would be so anticlimactic.

I just sense the need for this to take a number of turns; including that Anya has now had the sexual tap turned on but there may be some trouble getting control of the flow. She could reconnect with those college friends whom she was cut off from and they come to stay...plus the pissing fetish could become a flood. So many tributaries to navigate as a writer. Keep up the writing!

This is beautiful and I'm ready for so much more.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

I am intrigued about the plot line moving forward. The dynamics of the new relationship gives the author lots of options, looking forward to reading on.