by bilove69
Taking advantage of a vulnerable young woman AND cheating. Shame on you!
Nice start. Next chapter might be a little longer? You said she was like one of your daughters. Do you have daughters? Where were they during this comforting time? Will you be seducing them as well? Does your wife get involved with the" comforting"?
Love to hear what Peter does next to Tara
I think the optimum length for a story on Lit is 3-4 pages. This ended just as I was getting into it
Good start to a story, but it really needs go a little further before you end the chapter. Too short. I'll be looking for the rest.
got this old man really hard as I just read this great story.
need for you too write more
And this is one of my favorite! Looking forward to the other 3 chapters!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this story!
The “Daughters Friend” or “Friend’s Father” genre is my favorite and there is very limited Choices Out there! Good start to what could be a great series!
The first chapter was hot and had SO MUCH POTENTIAL!
What happened this 4 part series?
Innocent man helping spurned young girl He is attracted to her, but being a gentleman refrains from pressing her too hard. Ultimately she responds to his comforting & leads him down the path that will provide them both with joy & fulfillment.
I look forward to more of their relationship.