All Comments on 'Seducing Jack'

2 subs awesome

First, your protagonist didn't know who would be coming to his house so early, but then wasn't at all surprised his sister showed up. Would he not have been expecting her, considering he never asked why she just showed up at his door with luggage? Most people, seeing someone they knew carrying luggage, would have inquired what brought them to their house unannounced.

Second, if they were so close, why had he not called or visited her since leaving home? This would have been at least 6-8 years of no contact. Again, most people would have contact with their families during this time, unless there was some break or turmoil that forced them to leave and sever all ties.

A little more background beforehand would have been nice to immerse ourselves in your story.

What an AWESOME story .

No man could have a better fantasy.

Two beautiful women and nothing but sex and love blended with tender affection between 3 people.

Hope you have another chapter.

C an't wait for his birthday.

Poor ending

This is a good story so far, but there is a lot still to tell. Please continue the story.

Poor Amy got left out in The end. Not really into the Dom/Sub thing but hey a good blow job when ever you feel like it, or a good fuck, puss or ass, what the fuck. Maybe a good spanking could do them both good.

Good start lots of build up but no details on the sex between siblings at all except blowjob. He gave her what she wanted? It's like right at the end you got bored and lost interest in finishing the story.

that was different,

I'm not sure how i really feel about that........

There's no need for Amy!!!