by jacktar48
I have enjoyed reading your stories, keep up the creative writings
I do appreciate your input. First comment I have had on this novel. But then something is not quite right with the website right now either -- construction in progress, apparently.
There are seven more segments waiting to be approved, and more in the chute. Wish I could revise the first parts, as I wasn't intending to continue past two or three parts and wrote those directly into the submission box. But sometimes these things just take on a life of their own...
Have enjoyed this series...like the idea of a mother teaching her daughter's boyfriend how to "break" her in and having fun doing it...keep 'em coming!
Thanks, Arrow. I like the idea too, although it is kind of...preposterous. But fun to fantasize about. And there is a method to this madness, as you will see if you bear with me.
I appreciate you taking the time to comment.
Anyone that finds the clearly stated subject matter offensive should refrain from reading it. Perhaps you would enjoy the Teletubbies more.