All Comments on 'Seducing Jennifer Pt. 15-16'

by jacktar48

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Thank heavens you are bringing Jennifer back into the story

These tangents with the crazy MILF and the dreams aren't all that interesting. The early chapters with the tension between Jennifer and her mom were much better. They were really well done. These later chapters, not so much.

I'm looking forward to more good stuff with Jennifer and Jack and the MILF Anna.

jacktar48jacktar48almost 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks for your input

Interesting...I'm going to review with that in mind.

But yes, Jennifer was always in the wings, and now she's back in a major way. As for Mom...who knows? She's out there somewhere and who knows when or where she'll turn up next.

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