All Comments on 'Seducing Mom Ch. 10'

I'm not sure if this is a twist in plot to end the story nicely around Halloween, or if it just went off on a tangent that strayed from another road off the beaten path. This engagingly long story started out well, and even continued on well after many authors would have taken a break on it. But this new turn is not what I would call erotic, even though you have the subject matter pegged squarely as incest/taboo so at least it's in the right category. I hope that a new chapter will shed some light on the matter and possibly bring the fornication and eroticism back together at the same time. Good luck with your future endeavors.

Very long tale....and I felt the end was rushed a bit, I expected more.

Don't give up though! I found the early ones to be very erotic and exciting. Try going back to it's roots.

Bama you should think about writing professionately i have never been so wrapped up in a story as i am in your seducing mom series it reads like a novel. Great work

I was expecting something horny on incest but the story was not upto the mark. It should have dealt with the boy banging his mom more than just a passing remark

Please do not end the story end here. I want to read more....

I read the first page of this chapter and just quit reading, not my style at all. I had really enjoyed your fantasy (except the chapter of his Mom and Aunt Sarah dominating him so badly) and I compliment you on your story through Chapter 9. Keep writing on different stories, not this one. Thanks for your work.

Luk dude he should be incharge of that impregnenting plan but keep writing.

You were going good, until you got into this stupid ass story line.

Man, You ruined your story by bringing this 'Lady J' and blah blah...

You are a spineless waste of life. Do yourself a favor and just get your junk whacked off permanently and quit pretending to be a man

you ruined it

I won't read anymore

it went from good to spineless piece of shit

Chapter 3 was already really bad, but this just utterly ruined the story. It was already mentioned he didn't like how he was tied up and forced to do whatever his mom and aunt wanted him to do , how did this make any sense?

Extremely interesting story with subplots seamlessly merged. For all the women Joe's life, the story is logically coming to a conclusion. Sue is either to immature emotionally or psychologically and/or lacks a solid ego for Joe and/or this group. Joe has weighted the pros and cons of his situation and has made the most practical, mature, and logical decision possible. A mature, logical being with a solid ego and id can make personal trade offs for extreme personal gains.