by i_think_kink
Please let me know what you think of my story, its only my second submission so please keep any criticism constructive 😊
Fantastic description and build up just to leave us all drooling for what happens next!
I liked it, it went straight to the sex scene, which was very detailed and hot, it didn't have any story or character buildup but perhaps thats what you were shooting for.
Thought is was incredibly hot and reminded of a former boss I had and wanted but had to reject because I was engaged at the time. I so wanted to feel him too. Can't wait to read more. Nicely done!