All Comments on 'Seduction of a Techie'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
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And here I've been doing all my tech support by phone, or having the customer bring the computer by my place of business. Foolish me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
switching persons

right in the middle of the tale you switch from 3rd person he to 2nd person you.

walkingeaglewalkingeagleabout 19 years ago
Great little story!

This is a great little story of teasing, want, need, and wonderful climax!

Great job!

JohnnyMaxJohnnyMaxalmost 12 years ago
Have a job

A pretty good tale - BUT you plugged the power cable in but forgot the data link and the formatting and the sys install - missed opportunities. Love stories that use double meanings like this - especially as I used to teach Comp Sci and have had a couple of students who picked up on the doubles, conversations only though.

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