All Comments on 'Seduction of Helen'

Really good story!! Lots of good erotic details!! I love to lick one as much as anyone, and this was a good detail of such an encounter!!

Keep up the good work!!

Hi, Lilinye

This is really a sexy story. It sounds as if there will be a Chapter 2, so I will be watching for it. All the best to you and your female partners.

Other than that not a bad tale

I like your writing style, but I didn't particularly care for Helen's seduction. It's like she's already a lesbian flirt, so all you need to seduce her is put on an Andrew Blake video? I'm sorry, but I just wasn't aroused. Also, I liked it when she asked Helen how many guys had squeezed her ass today, but why couldn't she have then squeezed Helen's lovely ass? If it's that nice then it shouldn't be ignored.

I hope you will come all over my face. I can't wait to taste your steaming hot juices.

Guess Who?

Waiting for the next chapter of this story! Please write more...it was a great read!

Hot, reminded me of my first time with another woman when i was at university. So I gave it a very biased 5* amazing how many liked it but hid behind the anon alias to post their comments