All Comments on 'Seduction of the Babysitter Ch. 01: Jess'

This is a good start. I like the character development that you´re doing. Please, give us more.

I want her to get on with her homework so that she thinks has more time for what we're going to get next. I don't just want chapter 2 I want lots and lots of detail.

Thank you for your comments and feedback. Im waiting for Lit to publish the other 3 chapters. And then you will have the whole story. My apologies for the wait. I hope you enjoy the rest once the moderators approve my work. Please just be patient with me over this week. Again, thank you and for furture reference I will keep in mind to just write the entire story no matter the length since i see that most want it all...LOL