All Comments on 'Seduction on the Sea'

I absolutely enjoyed this story,and yes you should turn it into a novella ! 5* from me :)

I vote yes! 10/10 would read again

not much on these kind of stories, but it was good and I would read more of this story if you do write more, it could be a good series

Yes you should. IT was really special and we loved it. I am so curious to see how it would go on with your fantazy. Just do it.

I loved this, good writing skill and story telling. You should definitely continue. 😍

A very good read I think you should carry on with adding to an interesting adventure

I look forward to reading more of Seduction on the sea

A great start please expand on your story

Cannon has three n's, and did you mean "forever hold your piece" or did you mean "peace"? Perhaps you were making a joke! Good luck with it.

Too easy! Capture and fuck. Where's the resistance, an antagonist in the story. I like the novel idea of a lady pirate who's the captain of a ship versus the damsel in distress theme. But thus far, it's lacking dimension ie character development and conflict. Sex alone does not a story make especially if you're considering a novella. This is just my opinion of course, an I wish you well in your objective for this story.

Just wanted to say thank you to everyone for the feedback thus far. I've taken it all to heart, both the good and the bad, and plan to start brainstorming up the novella details soon. It may be a while, as I plan to take the time to try and come up with a compelling story, steamier sex scenes, and better editing.

Thanks again, everyone!

A fine story. Looking forward to reading more.