All Comments on 'Seeing Colors'

I especially loved this line, 'I felt as though he had walked through my soul and wrapped his hand gently around my heart.'

I really loved the first half, but once they started having sex the initial soft romantic feel of the story really faded away for me.

You used the word 'baby' much too frequently in dialogue, try and vary that or not use it at all.

Good development, poor ending.. for me.