All Comments on 'Seeing Double'

very erotic.

only thing you need to work on is spellcheck before you submit. no reason to have typos in your story.

a great read, though.

I was just going to echo the previous comment but I am not all that concerned about your spelling errors. With or without them it IS a GOOD story. THANKS for sharing it.

If this is your first story I look forward to reading more from you, it was very good indeed.

Other than running your story through spell check I have no bad things to say about it. Keep up the good work and well done

...there will be a next time! ;-)

great job!

That was fucking hot, man. Keep up the writing!!!

Great story, although I might have placed it in Group sex and not incest for a category.

Double your pleasure, double your fun, make love to twin sisters anytime. My Doctor says I can't read stories this hot any more. There bad for my heart. WOW!!!

Yawnnnnn ruined by the not so average man.

Stories are always better when they don't even mention any measurements or how big he is.

nice thanks

Yea that was a good story but it would have been better without the bondage. The fact they tied him up and RAPED him ruined it for me. And yes in my opinon it was RAPE. They took his consent away when they tied and gaged him. Not my thing so ruined the whole thing.

That was rape & I find that disgusting. 1*

Best twin Halloween story EVER

Wish you continued this chapter.

Krissy and Mike get together, maybe married

Great sex

really hot, my girlfriend was so into having sex with me that she invited her sister to join in, they were not twins and her sisters tits were smaller but they both liked to fuck me a lot, i married my girl friend and her sister came with us on our honeymoon, and moved i with us afterwards. i still satisfy both of them every time we fuck.

(11/1/2022) Poor Paul. Bad wifey.., bad wifey. Hell of a sister though. Five stars!