All Comments on 'Seema's Journey Ch. 06'

I'm waiting for more. The story has me wanting to attack the Uncle and wanting the girls to be safe and be thru the crappy journey that they are having to go thru.

That's it. I got frustrated trying to get to the next page, having always to go to it through your name and then attempting to figure out where I and it was.

That said, everything about this submission was fantastic, except the opening page. She "leaned" against the wall, not lent, or whatever you wrote.

Just another author who stops writing before completing their stores.

It was nice, but I'm totally frustrated the story has been abandoned..