All Comments on 'Semi-Fresh Meat'

by Smokey125

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Bad end

It wasn't the best ending but I like pussy so :)

stroudlestroudleabout 5 years ago
Oooh Jill

You've been a bad girl and now you getting your punishment.

Brilliantly written story, I could feel Jill's anguish turning into fear, it was written so well.

Jill was a unpleasant lady who met her match with her two guards and I'm sure she would regret her bad behaviour once Krysten wakes up. The fact that all the characters were bad people in some way gave you free rein to let loose the torment, great. Brings a new meaning to the phrase 'doing time' cue evil chuckle.

I wish every author showed the care that you do in correct category placement and tagging.

Thank you Smokey

Jc

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Writing lesbian erotica has become one of the most important things in my life. I try to make all my main characters at least reasonably three-dimensional, and balance out the Smokey Sagas between sweet, fluffy, light-hearted pieces with happy endings, and rough, sinister tale...