by Smokey125
You've been a bad girl and now you getting your punishment.
Brilliantly written story, I could feel Jill's anguish turning into fear, it was written so well.
Jill was a unpleasant lady who met her match with her two guards and I'm sure she would regret her bad behaviour once Krysten wakes up. The fact that all the characters were bad people in some way gave you free rein to let loose the torment, great. Brings a new meaning to the phrase 'doing time' cue evil chuckle.
I wish every author showed the care that you do in correct category placement and tagging.
Thank you Smokey
Jc