All Comments on 'Semper Fi Pt. 06'

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thilltell about 12 years ago

Who is Barb with at the end?

She sees Garret but Frank asks if he's too heavy. Either way I can't wait till the next chapter.

ambush184 about 12 years ago

to be continued...

Sooner rather than later I hope.

bruce22 about 12 years ago

The part that I am interested

in was hardly touched in this chapter. It not exactly taut with suspense... Though that tree branch....

tazz317 about 12 years ago

ABSENCE DOES MAKE THE HEART GROW

and swell into an emotional rescue. TK U MLJ LV NV

calibeachgirl about 12 years agoAuthor

oops!

Barbara should be with Garrett at the last part of the story. I'm so sorry.

tazz317 about 12 years ago

NO OOPS

this makes the story complete but without full closure. An epilog can clear and clean it up. TK U MLJ LV NV

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