All Comments on 'Senior Class Daughter Swap Ch. 01'

I liked it. Good angle on incest. Father and daughter love fucking each other. Well described sex. Good job.

You really needed to stick to having the daughter in the third person “she” and not lapsing into the second “you” as you did. It makes it a disjointed read.

You never had your cock up my tight chute. Thank God.

Need more background to this story. Where is her mother? How does this all start? Is there an equivalent son-mother relationship in this free use society of yours? Other questions come to mind, but hopefully you see where I am headed.

Lack of a solid background and the change in from referring to daughter from third to second person caused problems. Could only give this three stars.

I love your take on "free-use". I would love being leased or taken at home. Please cont her story of the Swap. She needs to learn and experience more from her Dad and others.

Love this. What A GOOD GIRL!

please write more this is unbelievably hot ❤️

Midway through, it switches from 1st person, to 2nd person. It's really jarring, especially when you're a guy.

The change in perspective was so jarring and ruined it for me. Good up until then. Pick a perspective from the start and it will Flow better.

Once you get the "perspective" down, I think this series is a sure "winner"!

Please continue, I need much more of this intense sex!

Great story! Very hot.

this story started so good, but I stopped reading when you switched to 2nd person. I hate 2nd person

PLEASE!! ...... GO TAKE SEVERAL WRITING CLASSES!!! Your writing style sucks.