All Comments on 'Senorita'

This had the right amount of pacing and sensuality. I really felt the sparks that the lovers felt.

This story is definitely in the wrong section. There is absolutely nothing in this story remotely related to Exhibitionist or Voyeurism. It would be a great story for another section, but not here.

Erm ... I submitted a story entitled 'Senorita' to this section, but this is not it!! I don't know who wrote this one but there has been some kind of a mix up as I did not write this!

I guess somethign went wrong during the posting, because I did already read did story, but then under teh title 'like clockwork' by moon_witch90

Maybe you should try posin the real 'senorita' again, because I am looking forward to reading it.

I have posted again under the same title, just waiting for it to be approved, so hopefully it should be up soon.