All Comments on 'Senses at Play'

Steamy! I loved it - thank you for this lovely sexy story.

This is a simple but believable story, one that many people might actually find themselves willing to try, well written and with interesting twists, something for everybody.

Forgot to ask, this is a great read, do you have a book or more stories?

HOT!

God, I love this story, I had to take my time reading it, I wanted to run ahaed but stopped myself. I felt teased as I read every part. Very well done girl, especialy for a first.

Just came across this site after looking at different erotic writing ones, i scanned through the different categories and read a few stories, this one i thought showed promise, had a great idea, felt almost real as if you have tried it or know someone who has. Either way, i will vote for it, 5 stars.