by Bob_Aganoush
Was fantastic, i like the way you wrote the scene with Lady Amber, the conflicting emotions shone through. I had been waiting patiently to see what happened since you left us with a cliff hanger last chapter and i was not disappointed.
The first time letting go of control is not an easy moment, in any situation, and you portrayed this excellently.
Well done and the usual 5 stars from me.
Appreciate the feedback. I'm working on the next chapter, but please bear with me, as I'm going on vacation soon so will take me a little longer to get the next chapter out there.
Great story so far and a lot of room for further adventures. The cliffhanger is killing me ... hope to see the next chapter soon. :-)