by Bob_Aganoush
A little slow going... And then another devilishly cliff hanging ending... Undoubtedly to make sure that we come back for more... And come back we shall... For who can resist the thought of Tara crossing that fine line that separates vanilla from deeper and darker flavors?
Is LA training Tara to be Susan's dom? That would be awesome!
Thanks for writing it. Another great chapter. Can't wait for the rest!
You've got a mean streak in you. It was just getting interesting again when you pulled the plug. Even Tara must be getting frustrated by now. It looks as though LA is going to domm Tara in Susans presence but I guess the question is how will Susan respond. I can't wait to see how it plays out. Will Susan try to stop it or maybe be included or just watch and take notes. It would be hot to restrain Susan in her chair and make her watch as she takes control of Tara. At some point I assume that the other Mistress will join LA. I hope you have the next chapter ready soon.
There will be one more chapter in the story, so stay tuned. I hope to have it done in the next few weeks.
Bob A.
I'm really enjoying this story, like the others I gave it a 5. I like the way you develop the characters and have them interact with one another. It's clear from the ending you are planning at least one more chapter, I hope there will be many more after that.
Loved all 7 chapters so far - a great storyline and very erotic development throughout! Although the next chapter will be the last in this tale, I hope that you will consider doing more such along this line in the future!
you had me wet the entire time, what a fantastic story !!!!!!!!!!!
5 stars not nearly enough
but now we the readers, are eager to see susan and tara, begin a relationship, where susan finally lets go and submits to mistress tara
thank you again for a super story
carrie