All Comments on 'Sensual Anal'

If this is your first attempt at erotic writing, I'd say good start!

Good first story.

good one! I use my 40 y/o curvey married p/a's anus every friday afternoon after lunch in the locked office, car or nearby woods. She wears retro pants & stockings & touches herself while I go in hard. I usually cum twice and then she does a large poo into my hand.

Try writing in the third person. It's how writers do it.