All Comments on 'Sensualist Ch. 13'

by Grouchojim

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William smythWilliam smythover 8 years ago
Sorry to see this end

It has been an excellent series. Good story lines and some of the very best graphic descriptions of good sex.

The consolatdion is that with this talented writer one series ends and another begins.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Not sorry to see it end

After Page 1, maybe. But Page 2 included something like "witch you can see it between..." Learn to write English before you try a full story, let alone a series!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Wrong Name

Got your characters confused on who was in the car. You said Lillian, even though it was Nikita. Just need to proof read what you've written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Is this the image of Nikita?

Found her, https://www.pinterest.com/pin/708965166327862273/

A vision in pale green summer dress, sizable nipples seemed to be trying their best to burst through the summer dress she wore, with an unparalleled sight of her camel-toed pussy.

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