All Comments on 'Sentient Sperm'

Wishful Thinking! :-)

Started reading thinking a load of crap but soon I had cum to love this story. Great work.

I wish!

Thank you for your feedback. This was a fun story to write, but it got out of my control. I may try it again from a different tack later on... but don't hold your breath waiting for it! :)

This story made my heart pound faster, my mind get flooded with sexual thoughts, and my "meat" wanting that this happens with it

I'm divided about this story. Frankly, i despise mind-control rape stories, and that's basically what this was. On the other hand, I was tickled pink with the idea of sentient sperm.

I understand your reticence. I like the idea of transformation, or change, more than that is control-especially abusive control. I also like a bit of oddness.. like sentient sperm.

Thank you!