by Ameaner
Okay, I've got to ask why you are making these chapters so short. It seems unnecessary and reads unnaturally at some of your stopping points. Also, how many more chapters will there be to this series?
Characters continue to be developed in both depth and breadth. From one's past, we can gague the characters present and future actions. Likewise, intertwined subplots become more readily addressable. 5 star series.