All Comments on 'Serena and the Soccer Mom'

by patricia51

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rgraham666rgraham666about 17 years ago
As always

A hot piece of work. Quite erotic with an undertone of sweetness.

Nicely done, patricia.

bornagainbornagainabout 17 years ago
Great piece of work

Patricia51 i really loved your story i have enjoyed your stories.

ScribblerosScribblerosabout 17 years ago
Patricia51 is a good writer

and this is one hot story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Another sexy erotic Serena seduction story

Thanks for writing this story about Serena and the soccer mom that you mentioned in Elegance. Please keep more stories about Serena and her many loves coming in the future. Your stories are great!

matriarchmatriarchalmost 17 years ago
Consumate...

...as always. Well done. Mat xxx

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Amazing

A great piece of work, sexy, stunning, and has all the pieces of the puzzle. I just love how the girl with a married woman has morals, best part.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Oh My

This story happened to me last summer down at the jersey shore. I'm a soccer mom and I met a very beautiful black woman who awakened me to the complete joys of being with another woman. she mad me cum so hard and yes she was the first to f my butt as well. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
intensely exciting overall

but some of the brief tangents early on interrupt the flow of the story.

mmarfoxmmarfoxover 13 years ago

Very hot. I love this character. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
hot stroy

i felt like it was because of the way you potraid that blonde. tracywhite123@yahoo.com

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Superlative!

An extremely well written story. Plausible and beautifully crafted.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Nice

An erotic story, but still having some "Code" she follows for her interactions. Well written and enjoyable, look forward to reading more from you.

skywriter62skywriter62over 8 years ago
Great story!

Very well paced and straight forward! I loved it! Will Serena be back?

mayishaveyoumayishaveyoualmost 5 years ago
A great story

I used to read this story by myself but now me and my enjoy reading stories together while we rub each other to orgasm. She really enjoyed this story because she does enjoy being seduced by a sexy woman with a straponl

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I can't stop fingering myself imagining that Serena's Fucking my wet pussy. Please let this happen to me.

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