All Comments on 'Serpentine Ritual Ch. 02'

I guess this is supposed to be for laughs,cause it cannot be taken seriously,get real,lol,,,,thanks for the laughs,,,good luck

I'm not very pleased with this chapter either, but I hope a new story will make up for it, I guess the reason that this one was pretty poor, was because I was really not into it, I kept switching between this and Vampyre of Lust, plus I was kind of forcing myself to write... sort of... well not really, but it wasn't flowing as it should have. My apologies for it.

I had sort of higher hopes for this portion of the story. It's unfortunate you chose to continue it since you said you weren't very into it. It may have been better to have left it alone until the story /did/ call to you as its Creator... Sorry if I sound a bit nit-picky. I just had hoped it would have better flow to it since the first part had seemed interesting.

Yeah I realize my poor judgement here, but I'm working on a new story and have already posted another one (Quarantine: Failed) I hope you'll enjoy it. Chapter 3 of Serpentine Ritual will, unfortunately be put on hiatus for the proceeding future. Thank you for your comment, and I will do my best in the next chapter, whenever i get around to it.

There aren't many good 'cum inflation' stories on here but yours are the best, I saw your comment about delaying the third chapter which is a little sad, I'm looking forward to reading what Haley is going to do to Deus and the birth of millions of human/snake hybrids.

Keep up the good work!

Not this one, but a new one shot, though it might turn into a series. Also if anyone likes cum inflation stories then check out Ensnared Succubi by ShadowWolfe. Gift of the Old will have a new chapter soon, maybe in the following week or so. No promises though.

I wish I could write more, however my computer broke and I'm currently saving for a new one. The worst part is that, like an idiot, I forgot to back up the files. Now for some good news; I've been brainstorming a lot and planning most of the new chapters, thanks to this I should be able to update most, if not all, my stories fairly quickly.

great storyline. I wish you would finish it out but no biggie. Can't wait to read more.

Will you be coming out with a third part of this series anytime?

You are such a talented writer but please, for the sake of your readers, finish your stories.

Well Wheel's the fact that 80-90% of the stories in the Erotic Horror and Nonhuman sections ARE UNFINISHED your chances of seeing this excellent story finished are slim to none. I think the writers of unfinished stories get their joys off by throwing their readers under the bus by not finishing their stories. I feel the site does not place much importance on or pushes the writer to finish a story. These 2 things not being stressed by the web site leads to so many unfished stories. I also understand that the writers do this for free and in their spare time and that sometimes things more important than writing occurs in their lives. But not to the 80-90% level seen in these 2 sections. So Wheel's, join the Club of Frustrated Readers of Literotica's Erotic Horror and Nonhuman stories. Wardmaster 91D70