All Comments on 'Service'

Thank you for this amazing story.

A very well executed story. Your writing style is colorful, raw, and gets into the moment.

Wow! Excellent story! Well written and totally hot! Please write more!!!!!!

I agree with everyone it is hot and well written. I had a little trouble getting into it as it seemed to start in the middle. She just has a crush on him and they have never done anything before and they jump in this deep? Where did all this come from?

I loosened up and gave you the 5*s your other story deserved. IMHO you are quite good. Very good, in fact. I think the word for it is "talent," and I hope you continue to develop yours. Too bad this guy doesn't fuck her. I don't know. Personally I could go in for some of this myself but not to the extent your male character does. I don't like guys like that. He sounds too convincing as a dominator. All he would have to do is give some tiny indication that he is acting and I could relax, but he doesn't. So he is very suspect to me. I liked the nice touch of the guy in the elevator hitting on her. Your character is terrific.

To be honest, you ought to write more...much more! This is a very well written and interesting story. Good characters, good dialogue and very 'believable'....oh, and very erotic! Thank You.

Great story; I loved every minute of it! EXTREMELY hot! Can't wait to read what happens next ;)

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Really unbelievable. Nothing original. Just plain bad.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. One of the best!