All Comments on 'Service with a Smile Ch. 01'

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kfdcanadakfdcanadaabout 6 years ago
No sex, but a good intro.

A good foundation chapter. A few typos. Looking forward to the build up to follow.

Freddog6601Freddog6601about 6 years ago
Weak start.....

If you’re going to have more chapters, why bother posting this weak snippet?

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