All Comments on 'Serving The Council Ch. 03'

next chapter please, this is startng to get good.

Hurry up.

just had something else that is rattling around , so going to that for a time, then back, or may just go on insperation, which ever one is flowing, i'll work on

Please don't stop working on this one...I understand if you want to get another idea down, but please continue to work on and concentrate on this. It really sucks when you don't get new chapters for months. The story has our attention so please keep it going. I do wanna ask why no one asked for the older one's hand since I thought that was why they came to America, to get her mated off. I think you could benefit from an editor just to clean it up. It's a great story and it would be nice to take out the obvious mistakes. Just a quick note would be starting a new paragraph when a new person speaks. Great story. Hope to see a new chapters soon and to find out what an arbiter is. And what is Lily's background? Why if her mother is mother to shifters and not a witch then what is she one?

this is a great story hope you get time for more chapters

and learn the ancient ways to date. TK U MLJ LV NV