by aristocratic
That story is really, really, cute. And a very original plot line. I don't know if you could carry it very far in future chapters (continued help, budding romance, arms out of casts, developing love), but it might be worth a try. In any event, I liked the story.
-- KK in Texas
The least she can do now is sit back down and blow him. (I suppose we should be grateful she needn't need to take a shit; it wouldn't have been quite so erotic to have him wipe her arse.)
I really liked the story. Well written. Enough detail and easy to both enjoy and empathize.
Unusual story, very simple, yet I liked it. Did they become lovers? You left it open for a 2nd chapter, and I hope there is one.
Very interesting story I think it could easily become a
series.....
I began reading the "new" stories, and after reading one that sounded like it would be good, I quickly left it. The next one was yours....and I have to say I was very much involved in it, hoping that this poor girl wanted more than just someone to wipe her after she peed. I wasn't disappointed. Very well written, very different, very enticing... I think your writing is wonderful and look forward to more of the same.
LLB
when i found this site this was the first story i read and it is the most exciting story i have ever read
when she asks with homework it felt so innocent but the more i read the closer i got to the screen
it makes you think that she wanted more than help and the way she is discribed is so cute
i hope to here more from this heart warming story
Really disappointed to seee that no follow up chapters have been posted.
Really novel plotline very delicately written. Wonder if it was autobiographical?