All Comments on 'Setting Up the Wrong Person'

Aside from a couple spelling errors, very nice short short story. More and more Literotica writers are recogniing that Hollywood stars aren't the only good lookers of, as it is said, "Mature years."

he tips an escort to make lewd comments on her way out the door following a massage with happy endings and thinks it will help his introduction to the neighbourhood?

Oh dear. You went from past tense to present tense then back again.

Your grammar was awful as in your/you're. A good story spoilt.