by StephanieRuby
Wonderful story and easy to believe. Hope there is more.
Enjoy the shearing, giving and loving.
The Title says it all I think except that some, considerable, editing would improve the reading pleasure.
Also a bit of an anachronism having a theatre room with space for vhs tapes so I guess the story was written some years ago?
Will be interesting to see if the sequel appears in due course.
As I said. . . Interesting!
M
Loved it.
Hubby away for the night. Was a wonderful read for me.
Yes, I'm writing it now. But, I only write one hour per morning. It will take a little bit.
My apologies, my muse has been away helping other writers. It just isn't flowing smoothly. When she returns, I will submit another story. Thank you for your patience.
Love, peace and joy
Stephanie.
Started great. But got slowly more and more unbelievable and then when she ditched and hurt lori in such a random and careless and needless manner, was the end for me.