All Comments on 'Seven Days of Service - Day 01'

by Hatsuda

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MastersWenchMastersWenchover 9 years ago
Oh Myyy!

Well, this certainly was a delicious start to a story! Great job! I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Thank you!

MastersWench

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
UGH!

Didn't find anything entertaining in this mess.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I loved it!

please post the rest :).

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice start

Great start to what could be a fun story.

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 9 years ago
Loved it

Not been reading much for a few weeks so playing catch up.

Loved it. Well written, secksy and verrrry compelling.

Will read the rest as I get a chance

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Wanted to like it but you did not establish a foundation that supports a business contest becoming a sexual, and publicly sexual, situation. Without more reason for that being the prize i am left with too much of a what the hell feeling.

Horseman68Horseman68about 7 years ago
Man Up You Wimp-ass.

Will stop reading story with this chapter am so disgusted with supposed male lead. Oh, his dick is so hard he can't deal with her. Ugh. Makes me gag till I puke. 🤑 She has more balls than he will ever grow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Well I think it's quite good so far . . .

. . . There's a lot of rubbish on Literotica. This has some pacing and the writing is even.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Really a turn-on, Can't wait for Chapter 2.

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