All Comments on 'Seven Hundred and Fifty Words'

Ok, what was the story?

Excellent. Made me know how that boy felt. Been there - several decades ago.

Thank you.

This was so much like my first date and first time with a lovely lady who took care of me after my wife died. Bravo!

Lovely story.

An unusual woman, one willing to look beyond what most women look for. It's not that she fucked him, it's that she looked for something more… Maybe something better. Thanks for the story five's

but no one cares how long the story is. There's no reason to mention the word count. All it does is distract the reader or make it seem like you wrote it for a stunt or something

Well done, esp considering the word restriction. I think the haters should try to write something half as good with such a restriction before they spew their ignorance. 5*

Sweet first time story

Too short.

Sweet first time for him.

Seven hundred and fifty well spend words. 'Brevity is the soul of wit'.