All Comments on 'Seventh Period Bra Shopping'

HA HA HA HA! HOW PATHETIC are your writing skills???

IDIOT! Leave writing to writers, and do us ALL a HUUUUUUUUUUGE favor!

The story itself was good. Your editing skills could use some work. Don't let the other idiot deter you from doing something you like. Keep working at it.

Ignore the idiot who feels it more appropriate to criticize...He must have liked it enough to read it that far (LOL) Keep up the good work!

It was alright could've been a small bit more graphic but i did enjoy it. Good job and keep writieng your good at it you just need some work is all.

I really liked this one, thought the unbelieveability factor is fairly high on this.

One thing that bugged me while reading it is the spelling of the word "wrap." rape and rapping are entirely different things. :)

I liked the story very much otherwise.

Please, write a sequel. This story makes me want to get a bra fitting and let the older woman fondle me and suck my tits! Maybe I'm not wearing the right size bra.

Your story came pretty darn close

to what my sister and I experienced at the local mall. We love to shop for bras there.

Great story, reminds me of the lesbian threesome I had

To the author: centralcalguy Your story ....."SEVENTH PERIOD BRA SHOPPING" was wonderful It gave me a "hardon" reading it.

Parts of the story in which I found stimulating ...."Don’t be shy, girlie, I’ve seen many women. Now let’s get that terrible bra off you.” She reached around me before I could move and unhooked my bra. She tore my hands away from my breasts and spun me around again."

Her it gets sexy ... “Let’s see,” she said as she reached out her hands and cupped my breasts. She began to lift them and push them together. She felt the weight of them and slide her hands to the underside of my breasts and cupped them."... She started to explain the different types of bra that I should be wearing – but ..( I wasn’t listening to anything she was saying. )...I couldn’t believe that she was feeling me up I was getting completely horny. My breasts are so sensitive that just having the cold wind on them was making me wet. I was getting wetter by the second."

“Nancy?”

...."realized that Amanda had wondered back to where we were. The sales lady removed her hands and grabbed a near by bra. “This should work,” she said handing me a bra. I was still stunned but even more shocked when she looked at Amanda and said – “come here, it’s your turn for a fitting.” She reached out and took Amanda by the wrist and let her next to me. “Remove your top,” she barked. “You can’t get the right bra if you’ve never been properly measured before.”......"Amanda looked as stunned as I was – but removed her blouse without a word. The sales lady then reached behind her and undid her claps. Her bra slid off her shoulders and hit the floor. We both just stood there – facing each other – with out breasts fully exposed. Her breasts were wonderful. Small but completely sexy. Her nipples where huge and her areola’s small and kind of pale pink. The lady rapped the tape around her and then said she was a 34 B. The sales lady moved closer behind Amanda and cupped her breasts from behind. I watched in amazement as the lady completely worked my friend’s breasts.".. ... I’m sure Amanda didn’t even hear. Her eyes were closed and she was thrusting her chest out. I could even hear her moaning a little."...

( This leaves my imagination thinking of the sales lady grabbing, caressing a girls breasts ..wishing those hands were mine ! ) ..

...“Oh my God,” Amanda said dropping the bra and grabbing both of her breasts. “That lady almost made me cum!” I watched with my mouth open as Amanda continued to play with her breasts and pull at her nipples. “God, I’m so horny! The feeling of someone strange touching me. I wish she wouldn’t have stopped.” ..Wow this part is powerful ..the girl almost Cumming.

..."My best friend is standing in front of me ( feeling herself up and talking about have some woman getting her off. “ ) ..Did she do that to you,” [ Amanda asked.

“Yeah.” } ...“Did you get horny too?”

“I guess so.” .."

...“I can’t stop playing with myself. I’m just so turned on.” Then she sat down on the bench and slid one hand into her panties. She leaned her head back and began finger fucking herself while still playing with one of her breasts. I could feel my panties getting soaked" ... /Just then I heard the sales lady come back and open the door.

/“How are you girls doing?” She looked at me first ....[ but quickly focused her attention on Amanda ] ...who hadn’t skipped a beat. She was starting to moan louder and move her hand faster and faster. I watched as the sales lady waked over to her, dropped to her knees and bent her head over her 34 B breast and took the whole thing into her mouth. Amanda cried out and grabbed her head – pushing it tight to her chest.

{ “Suck my tits!” } ..Amanda screamed."

...I slowly pulled down my panties, opened my legs and started fucking myself as I watched the show. The sales lady moved her way down to Amanda’s panties. She grabbed them and forced them down and off her body. She looked back at me and winked – “join us.” Then she lowered her head into Amanda’s lap. Again she cried out. “Oh my God! Yeah! Lick my pussy!”..

.( ..Very powerful as my imagination pictures an older sale - lady down on her knees taking two teeenage "virgin" girls pussies! )

.." I couldn’t believe what had come over me. My mouth was watering to ..{ suck her tits. } .. I watched them bounce up and down as Amanda was squirming so much. Her chest was heaving and her breathing was quickening. I reached out with my hand and brushed up against her nipple. “Nancy – suck them please! I’m ready to cum! Oh please suck them! I need you to suck them! Please!” I lowered my head to within inches of her left breast."......."I let my tongue out of my mouth. As it brushed her nipple she moaned load. My tongue began to explore her breast. I was actually licking my best friend’s tits." ... ( Here comes the Finger- F-cking" ) ......." She reached under my shirt and slid her finger deep inside me. I rapped my hands around her breasts and frantically started sucking, pulling and biting them. She quickened her pace and was sliding her finger in and out of me at an unbelievable rate." ..

...“I’m cum!” Amanda screamed. Her body stiffened and started jerking. She pulled her hand from my pussy and grabbed the back of the sales ladies head and grinded it into her. She bucked up and down, side to side – rubbing her pussy all over her head."....

.( I do not know what others commenting on this but I find it descriptive and so does my C-ck ! }

...The sales lady removed her head from Amanda’s crotch and looked up at me. She smiled as she crawled over to me. She continued to look up at me as she lifted my skirt. “Do you want to cum too?” She asked. All I could do was nod."...." As she moved her head forward my heart felt like it was going to pump out of my chest. My head was pounding "

..{Her head was pounding her chests were heaving her nipples were sore but she experienced a new found feeling of Extreme Pleasure the pleasures of another Sucking them !

From J.M.

My husband has no idea how much I want to be on my knees licking Amanda and Nancy's wet pussies