All Comments on 'Sex and the Spellplague Ch. 05'

by srhammer8888

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice

Nice varied workup of your characters and decent plot development. You have a good vision and a good style of writing. Please keep going.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Dry opinion

Mystical change in Samon from gentleman to villain ruins all logic.

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Long-time writer, lost to the tides of life. I am currently in the process of worldbuilding and transitioning the lore, events, and characters of published works into this new world. New stories in the Forgotten Realms will likely be few and far between. An official account...