All Comments on 'Sex Club for College Students Ch. 02'

This was a great second chapter that you wrote about Callie. I like how you develop that character of Callie and how she's going to through problems at school. Keep up the good work

Mark

great read. take your time on the next one. dont try to top it by being unrealistic.

Keep up the good work! I like the idea of a sex club with 80 members - you can write forever with this story line. Can you come up with that many situations? That'll be the challenge. I'm enjoying your stories, and #3 was even better. However, I'm a bit confused...it seemed as if Calie was thinking she needed help after her first few dates, but the first two seemed to go without a hitch...they were great! Guess I'll have to reread #3. I see you are getting that Anonymous person who insists on leaving criticism without leaving a name. I do not think Literotica should allow comments without the person signing in. Anonymous should NOT be allowed. It seems that some can never enjoy a story without being picky. Personally, I'm grateful that people like you will take the time to write a good story for all of us to enjoy. Thanks!

Great detail and totally believable!

A perfectly told and believable story. You writing is compelling and takes the reader to the scene.

This one had a lot more sensuousness to it than the first Chapter had. Ii hope that means that you're getting more adept at your writing as this series goes on.